Kevin_MiddletonLv23yr

2021-05-25 01:39

Translation quality is good, but the story development is the worst. I tagged this as review as spoilers since I’m going to talk a little bit more in depth about the problems I has with the story. In the earlier chapters, the story seemed to be pretty good. B quality writing and story development, just what you’d like to see from a system novel. The godly choice system offered MC a starter choice, but only one of the choices was usable so in reality he didn’t have any choice at all. How often does he get to pick a choice from the choice system? Well, not very often. I read up to about chapter 150 and so far there were 3 choices. All of the choices seemed pretty obvious what the MC had to pick as the other options either didn’t do much for him or nothing at all. The story had been for the most part, following MCs first choice which was something that pretty much put him at the top of all mages on the planet and able to use all magic. After chapter 80 or so there’s a twist that completely ruined the story for me. It changed the story so that MC learns a bit more about what the system he has really is, and gives him a new goal. Turns out he isn’t the only one with a system and he’s not the only reincarnated person. Some chapters turn out to be multiple point of view, but these other characters are all really cringey. MC has to hunt these guys down and take away their “gold fingers” to upgrade his own system. Why? They were all originally part of his system and he was originally reincarnated from another mage that used to be OP. I guess this was before he reincarnated from a guy on Earth? Idk it’s confusing. These guys seem to be all over the place. It’s to the point where he’s walking down the street and running into these people. Would have been best if MC kept his original identity and had his own system offer him more choices that were a bit harder to make.

Magic Deity: Godly Choices

Hundred Thousand Feet of Red Dust

3.0

573 Chs