Review Detail of Michael_Brooks_8630 in The Invincible Full-Moon System

Not too bad of a read. bad grammar can be fixed and from what I have seen so far there is apparently effort in regards to that later but the Mc....I don't know where to start...Trash...is probably the best word for him. No development at all. His personality. motivation and more are sub par at best and psychotic at worst. You would not want this Mc at your back tbh. I love the background of the world though