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Hein_Nay_Zaw
Hein_Nay_ZawLv142yr
2022-02-13 06:12

After reading up to 300 chapter…It still annoying that author forget reward items from completing the mission. Another thing is development between Mc and Fmc is very bad. Mc already made her female alpha and kiss her once and they go back to same relationship as before. But main thing to offset me is the rewards items. Do not give reward items if you will forget to use it

The Invincible Full-Moon System

Mrboogey13
3.9
1399 Chs

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Mrboogey13
Mrboogey13Author

For the reward part, I already briefed it I’m sure you missed it.

2yr
Novelreeead
NovelreeeadLv1

You can't even answer about the relationship development bruhh

Mrboogey13:For the reward part, I already briefed it I’m sure you missed it.
1yr
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Josh_De_Ocampo
Josh_De_OcampoLv4

is there a discord for this novel.......

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UselessYato
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So…I’m on the 17th chapter and while the story’s been great so far, it hasn’t warranted the 5* review I’m currently giving. What warrants this 5* review is my pity towards the author for having to deal with so many readers that don’t pay attention. As I said, I am on chapter 17 and I’ve lost count how many times people have attempted to fix the author’s “errors” for things they didn’t pay attention to. There have been explanations to all stat changes, or lack there of yet these readers constantly believe they know what they are talking about which then leads to further confusion as other readers begin to believe what they say. Sorry author, story’s great and I have plans on catching up, hope you the best.

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Tasha_Williams_0673
Tasha_Williams_0673Lv1

The Mc is honestly just disgusting he just stands there and watch the supernatural civilians get raped by humans and even lets the humans go and don't get me started on what he did to the assassin siblings, and he acts like humans are the good guys what a hypocrite there is no saving someone as disgusting as hm.

1yr
Virgin_Loli
Virgin_LoliLv3

I liked this story until the moment when the mc became a pathetic simp...................................................................................

3yr
HiddenSageMilkMan
HiddenSageMilkManLv10

450k veiws 11 reveiws all 5 star 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 Negtives Awfull grammer Stale dialogue Mental deficient Mc The world has terrible common sense Positive Has potential if the author just downloads Grammarly

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LordFangYuan
LordFangYuanLv4

author the mc could be more proactive with the girls , he has to be an alpha not a dense protagonist author the mc could be more proactive with the girls , he has to be an alpha not a dense protagonist

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Silent_But_Dudley
Silent_But_DudleyLv14

This novel is... Not great. The grammar Is so painfully bad that I can’t actually read anymore. Mistakes here and there are fine, but literally every sentence takes me out of it. Please if you write a book at least use grammarly or something. Also the writing has been... bad. Often times the author skips foreshadowing and straight up says “something is going to happen” before it happens and without foreshadowing. Its absolutely frustrating.

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oxygen5011
oxygen5011Lv2

Dialogs are dull, characters are one dimensional and i can't describe how much dumb mc is. He's literally walking through the fire and can't comprehend why the person in front of him is surprised. World background is okay, to some extent it's interesting. Overall i wouldn't recommend it unless author revise it

3yr
deathgod
deathgodLv3

mc a simp and that alone makes me hate the novel and if you wondering why I gave it 5 star is because author deletes reviews that show the bad side of his work

3yr
dragon_Individual
dragon_IndividualLv14

this book is quite enjoyable. problable because its a werewolf book that lacks the usaly extreme romance. This doesn’t mean it’s the book to end all books but its pretty good. Kodos to the author. 👍

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