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riley_batchelor
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the writing quality is good but story line and characters make you want to scream the author is a typical MC writing where the MC has nothing going for him and forces a bond the the romance partner wouldn't recommend reading

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Cultivator in the Beastworld

Puresol

Liked it!

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Puresol
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Hi there! Thank you for the review, I'm sorry that the MC isn't up to what you like. I had hoped to create a story where the MC is unsure and needs to grow into a strong character throughout the story and I suppose it has been a slow burn early on. I personally didn't want to make him incredibly overpowered or without any flaws/doubts so this can come off as weak and pathetic. If you would give the story a chance, I hope you will like Noxtis better as he grows, but if not thank you for the review!