Review Detail of goldenchild725 in Merciless Queen

It's a pretty interesting story. Translation Quality: You need to improve your grammar and punctuation. I saw a lot of errors, particularly when saying His Majesty. Titles need to be in capitals. Stability of Updates: I have nothing to say here. Story Development: It's pretty good. Character Design: I just find Astraea a little too childish. It feels weird to me. World Background: The world background is pretty good.