Review Detail of Victortoery12 in Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Chapters are too short, and there are too many authors notes that inflate the word count. Grammar is not great, please download grammarly and/or go over the chapters again. Authors don’t just write a chapter and never correct it, they edit multiple times before they publish it. You need to do the same and edit your chapters. The MC grew too powerful too quickly, and 6+ info-dump chapters was painful. I do like the Fic, though I wish you’d do better in terms of grammar.