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2021-03-09 15:39

its good so far, (Me: but if you are gonna write talking like this, you need to know when to put periods and when to hit Enter for the next line.) i would say to start writing using these ---> name "talking" name 'thinking' ______line break______ (POV change)

Beastars: The Last Humans among us

Kghost2015
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Kghost2015
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Yeah. Sorry there, mate. Thx for the heads up.

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kingkisecond0
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I just really hope the guy who made this keeps this up because I'll be waiting and can't wait what you'll make next.

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Flavia15
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The story was great but the writing keep making it difficult to understand when a character was talking, doing something or when it happened in the background. hopefully it can improve as you write more. good luck 👍

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