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Str4ng3r
Str4ng3rLv43yr
2021-05-03 17:13

Great story, but one thing bothers me a lot. That is, the main character's kokugan. Don't you think 20 x speed is a bit too much? I mean there is literally no genkai that can ever hope to match it if MC can just blitz everything when he gets strong enough. Please nerf it, or add some backlash. I mean MC just goes 30 times faster than his original speed and just drains his chakra. If MC is as fast as Naruto in Boruto, then he can easily one shot every opponent so far. Just feels extremely unrealistic for a bloodline to be this op. Not to mention, if someone had the bloodline before him, then how is it still unknown?

Simi realistic reincarnation into Naruto

Kyle80888
4.0
25 Chs

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Kyle80888
Kyle80888Author

Its not that OP because its taijutsu based

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Str4ng3r
Str4ng3rLv4

That doesn't matter though. If he's as fast as Naruto, he'll hit Momoshiki 30 times in his neck before he can react

Kyle80888:Its not that OP because its taijutsu based
3yr
Str4ng3r
Str4ng3rLv4

Plus it's supposed to be a "realistic" reincarnation. Don't really see how 30 x speed is realistic at all.

Kyle80888:Its not that OP because its taijutsu based
3yr
Str4ng3r
Str4ng3rLv4

Now that I think about it, as long as you don't give him too many powerups like tailed beast cloak, six paths, hashirama cells, etc, it should be pretty balanced.

Kyle80888:Its not that OP because its taijutsu based
3yr
Kyle80888
Kyle80888Author

Wasn’t planning on it. Maybe 8 gates but thats or way later

Str4ng3r:Now that I think about it, as long as you don't give him too many powerups like tailed beast cloak, six paths, hashirama cells, etc, it should be pretty balanced.
3yr
Str4ng3r
Str4ng3rLv4

Sage mode?

Kyle80888:Wasn’t planning on it. Maybe 8 gates but thats or way later
3yr
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Kyle80888
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Shameless Author here: I would like to thank all of you for reading my fan fic. It just motivates me that so many people would read my fic. And if you have any suggestions please dont be afraid to ask me.

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IEASIEAS
IEASIEASLv3

It is great idea and it could be a great story but shift this from 'novel' section to 'fanfic' section .. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Dark_B3rry
Dark_B3rryLv12

I don't know why, but mc just irritates so much ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Cerita yang Bagus , penulisannya Lumayan , Memiliki Alur Yang Bagus , Dan Penjelasan Tentang Chakra Dan Jutsu Serta Pelatihan Tubuh Bagus , Benar² Konsep yang Bagus , Aku Harap Kedepannya Akan Ada Lagi lebih banyak Konsep dan penjelasan Jutsu Dan Pelatihan Lagi , bukan Hanya omong kosong seperti Fanfic lain oooo**

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RandomSwordsThief
RandomSwordsThiefLv13

The reincarnation story is not as realistic as the title suggests, but for a green writer, it isn't bad. I love the new Dojutsu, but I find it completely unnecessary when he already has Mokuton. The baby should have been traveling with Tsunade and Shizune after the death of his parents. Backstory I made up: some Senju parents (Tsunade's cousin is the father) leave the village to live safely away from the shinobi life and death. The mother gets assassinated during her pregnancy after the sudden death of her husband. In this story, the being saves the child by having Tsunade walk by and reincarnates you instead of the baby that should not have existed. The mother still dies because this is her fate one way or another. I mean, this is important for the creation of a relevant main character. I believe that the writer would have had an easier time with the story if he added only the Dojutsu to the mc. No need for a headache to sort the backstory, if you know what I mean.

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Apurba_Sharma
Apurba_SharmaLv14

A great fanfic. It's very hard to find good fanfic and good writing style. But, author is one of the rare kind. He is already jonin level writer. Hopefully we will see a lot of chapters on this story.

3yr
killiam115
killiam115Lv2

good good luck

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Daoistf6P5Am
Daoistf6P5AmLv11

its good more chapters please more chapters pleasemore chapters pleasemore chapters pleasemore chapters pleasemore chapters pleasemore chapters please

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ChangedReviewer
ChangedReviewerLv4

Can't even spell the word "semi" correctly. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap]

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