Review Detail of EMMIMATION in Warlocks´ Wars

Hey, Good - Author, I believe you are referring to him becoming a Magus, not Warlock. Warlock specifically follows the part of ancient bloodline not drinking some damaging water potion that you have to create an innate spell pattern and for each new level, you have to make a new spell pattern to compliment the previous so you don't kill yourself. While a Warlock is more locked on elemental affinity to the ancient bloodline they follow and spells not specific to their nature cost more power. I believe you are taking from the background from WMW... it's great and all but it seems you haven't read your material all that well. Also if you read WMW you know there is a lightning warlock clan Leylin encounters in the strong underworld, you could use ancient lighting condor or ape for your MC. Warlocks do have their disadvantages which I do want to remind you of like having the feral instinct, prone to rage etc. I really want to see how you tackle that and also the bloodline shackle or limit. Also when casting other spells they are very limited. Bad - I'm getting sick of this harem thing already, two is a crowd already. And so is all these useless friends hanging around him that I could already smell something fishy about them especially the men. Author-it doesn't work that way, there are only eternal benefits' in the Magus world. Already too many insignificant characters. Also what his shit on the whole grand knight aura thing - that's a dead-end, keep it that way. This has already been explored in WMW why although there are knights magus such as Branded Knights or Blood knights it's far too limited on just being a purely physically powered magus because they are NOT still as powerful as a Warlock and also not as Versatile and useful as a Magus. Nobody follows that part except creating slaves with them. Because Magus knights have very few spells and later when shifting to other worlds or dimensions they are barely useful as they arent cognitive or spiritual ability users. Another bad is how poorly the MC doesn't buy or optimize new spells - especially spells under his lighting affinity. On how the MC doesn't seem to want to mind his own business and wants to save everyone and doing free stuff. it's very annoying, author please note the Magus world is a world on the basis of interest and personal benefits. Not whatever the MC is on. There are potions to raise his physique like how leylin did, please stop wasting time on the whole Grand knight Aura thing and quickly get to Advanced apprentice. It's disappointing at the amount of trouble he might have focused on him which he doesn't know about and is clearly not even cautious about - he died previously as a rank 3 apprentice and now he would die as a rank 1 Magus, not Warlock. Author, please reread WMW again to understand your writing.