Review Detail of SitOnBread in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Honestly this story is somehow good and bad at the same time, without a doubt its one of the best Harry Potter novels on the site, but certain stuff happen within the novel that just push it downwards for me. I can look past the whole no wand thing and to be completely upfront the age thing is weird and I don't understand why writers keep trying to do this, please stop - concerning his real age being higher than Quins age. Also, the whole Umbridge thing just made 0 sense, he let someone practically ruin the school, conduct child abuse -this being conducted on some of his friends- etc because using your family name to get rid of her would be 'weak' as if he hasn't done that throughout the novel (e.g. Rita, Draco), it's just funny at this point and makes no sense. He literally tied up ivy when she transformed into Daphne because he cares for his friends, but then basically turns the other cheek when Harry gets abused by Umbridge, make it make sense lol. Concerning the whole ivy thing the romance around her and the mc doesn't really make much sense but it's not my novel so I guess if you can look past it its okay. I am sure the writer was trying to convey some sort of character development but the way they went about doing this was incredibly poor. Like maybe instead he could have made a bet with his sister or grandfather that limits him using his family's powers or something, anything would have been better than what was actually done in the novel. Overall, the novel is okay, has good writing, upload intervals and world background, but the story development and character design weigh it down considerably.