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Review Detail of The_Damn_Crow in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

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Spoiler Warning: The first ~300 ch were fine its the where he goes back into the sin vault again it goes downhill, for me. I especially dont like the future version of mc comes and helps the past mc. It just seems like lazy writing to fix his plot hole. And i hate that the future self just memory wipes the whole interaction and then mind controls his past self, becuase from therefore we dont know how much is the originals mc’s decisions or the futures mc mind manipulation. We dont know the lasting effect the mind manipulation will have on the mc, basically creating a different character in my opinion.

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You do realise they are the same person right?