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I liked author's other work. Hp fanfic is one of the fanfic I like. Overall the author did a good job. I didn't like only two parts of the novel. The first is Mc's character. Mc says he wants to hide his strength and be low-key until he finishes school, but more than once he makes big moves in situations that don't concern him. Frankly, Mc gave me the impression of a sociopath. I think Mc is someone who likes to attract attention and be praised. His secret actions show this. While supposed to be the so-called magic nerd, Mc is constantly interfering with events unrelated to him, increasing the risk of being caught. Secondly, it is used not in this novel but in other novels in a way that I cannot understand. Paranoid Dumbledore. It first used it in a fanfic, but after that, for some reason, everyone accepted that Dumbledore is a paranoid senile person. In every fanfic, Dumbledore acts stupidly thinking that the MC of the novel will be the new dark lord. Dumbledore is portrayed as a manipulator in the Harry Potter books, I agree. But in the books, Dumbledore showed no signs of paranoia whatsoever. Fanfic writers have it. They always make a few characters stupid and obsessed with the Mc for no reason. Dumbledore, Danzo, Nick Fury these were especially used a lot. These people have held high positions for decades, planning a conspiracy is equivalent to breathing for them. But for some reason they turn stupid when they meet our 20 year old nerd Mc. They constantly attack him for no reason. I only said this to clear my heart out a bit though. The author did good job at this. Frankly, he reflected Dumbledore in my head pretty well. This Dumbledore is not paranoid, but he is a manipulator. He did not forget to use his brain like other writers Dumbledores. He is slowly revealing MC secrets. I don't know what he's planning, but as any intelligent person would, he won't act until he has gathered enough information. My second complaint is Mc's unprovoked paranoia rather than the author's portrayal of Dumbledore's character. However, MC is highly likeable apart from these two flaws. The side characters are pretty well reflected. I'm waiting for the rest. I hope this book finish. P.S When will love interest be announced?

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