Review Detail of in HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

What an incredible story!!! I love the way you interpreted some characters and some magic from the Harry Potter series. The world has been developed in an interesting way and I am always exited for new chapters to read more about this world you have expanded. The way you have made wands in this world is interesting but I prefer them to not be seen as debilitating items, but rather items that enhance a persons ability to channel and feel magic (but that is personal preference). The only thing that sometimes bugs me is the quality of writing. in short Great Story!!! please continue writing.