Overall, Bad Grammer and some words don't make sense. I think you should fix the Grammer before you post a chapter, You could always Google translate some words from your language to English. The story development is good but I'm dropping. If you think i'm rude I'm sorry but this is how I am and most authors appreciate the comments to improve. Bye!
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