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Ok..... That was a lot... To be honest, when I got to the last chapter, I was unhappy. I really want to know, what will happen next. I love the way that you described the scenes. I felt like.. I was inside that world. Can you try adding some spaces inbetween. When I looked at the first chapter..page 1, it was kinda jam packed. I had to look at the page a few more times, before I started reading the novel.
ARISTIA
Whannmarie
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Thank you very much for the review darling. I will definitley take what you said into account and sorry about the suspense the next chapter will be up in about an hour. I will also add spaces just for your comfort. Remember if there are any other suggestions please feel free to let me know. What my readers think matter to me