Review Detail of daremetochoosemyna in The Hunter That Returned From Hell
Review detail
I read 80 chapters and I can say this novel has a lot room for improvement. For beginning... Let's start with MC, he spent 400 years in hell... I guess it killed most of his brain cells. Zero research about 'hunter' actions before becoming one. If not plot armor, his stupidity would kill his family. Writing quality needs some editing. Some typpos here and there. Some sentences are quiete broken. WQ - 3 stars. You should consider editing your story before putting it before pay wall. None likes paying for being proof reader... SU - 4 stars. Story dev. - 3 stars. It's okay... Ruthless protagonist trying to improve his family situation and acts like wuxia protagonist killing random guy son. Blah blah blah. It could be avoided with some brains. Character design - 2 stars. It's probably weakest side of this story. Most of characters are cliché or bland. World background - 4 stars. Currently it feels like default Korean novel. This rating might improve if you make things better later in story. This review is based on free chapters. Maybe, you started to put more effort after getting contracted. I will visit later... No money for spirit stones and run out of passes. I hope this story improves. Good luck.
The Hunter That Returned From Hell
Rish_madara
Liked by 84 people
LIKEReplies17
It's very simple. It was edited but it's behind paywall. It's not logical? I am not native speaker but I can see mistakes. My grammar is worse and it means it needs editing as I usually don't care. I love people like you. You probably skipped through my review. Thanks for wasting oxygen.
Iasonas:Criticizing about Grammar but yet...image
You saying that is the equivalent of saying someone who doesn't know how to cook, don't have the right to say other people's food taste bad.
Iasonas:Criticizing about Grammar but yet...image
It feels more like neo chinese novel. While the location and hunter theme can mask the writing style the has more neo chinese elements. 1. the way he leveled up lacked excitement compared to "Seoul Station Necromancer" and "Only I Leveled Up" 2. The order in which he beat people up In chinese novels the usual order is goon>brother>uncle>father>grandfather too much cliche speeches making novel dull and too predictable 3.Although the author introduced game like elements he still uses profound elements like killing intent without a doubt he will introduce a technique where MC uses mana to strenghten part or his whole body.
Soran24:It feels more like neo chinese novel. While the location and hunter theme can mask the writing style the has more neo chinese elements. 1. the way he leveled up lacked excitement compared to "Seoul Station Necromancer" and "Only I Leveled Up" 2. The order in which he beat people up In chinese novels the usual order is goon>brother>uncle>father>grandfather too much cliche speeches making novel dull and too predictable 3.Although the author introduced game like elements he still uses profound elements like killing intent without a doubt he will introduce a technique where MC uses mana to strenghten part or his whole body.
You can criticize something even though you aren't good at it. Food connosiours dont need to know how to cook in order to criticize the food.
Iasonas:Criticizing about Grammar but yet...image
Very stupid argument. It's like saying that somebody who never wrote a book can't criticize other books.
Elmarc_Yarka:You saying that is the equivalent of saying someone who doesn't know how to cook, don't have the right to say other people's food taste bad.
Daoist_Rubeno:Very stupid argument. It's like saying that somebody who never wrote a book can't criticize other books.
