So far it is going pretty good. This is probably the first Genshin Impact fanfiction that I've read in this platform. Since they are very rare and I like the game very much my review might be a bit biased. Anyways, the flow of the story is decent imo as it normally follows the canon. Very few grammar mistakes from what I've seen. And MC doesn't seem very OP which is good imo, not being overpowered af gives a chance for conflicts and plotlines to arise, though his power has a very high potential to being OP. All in all, this is a very nice story and I am hoping for more in the future. Best of luck to the author.
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