Review Detail of BingeFics in A different SpiderMan in MCU AU

Binge_review Writing Quality: 4/5. Biased cuz I am not a big fan of 1st person pov. Imo, 3rp person pov gives more space for us to write and makes the story more engaging, however, every author has his own style. Not complaining. Stability Of Updates: 5/5. Regular updates is what everyone wants. Story Development: 4.5/5. The story pacing is alright. We are only at chapter 18, so not much can be said, but yeah, I have high hopes from this fanfic. Character Design: 4/5. This is the only thing that I think needs improvement. I know you want a cold OP Mc, but I would recommend using more vocabulary(?) and go with 'show, not tell' approach (cutting the guards in two halves is not enough.) World Background: 5/5. There's no point in giving lower rating in this part. Marvel is like the ocean and this fanfic is a cruise. It's up to you, as the author, to sail through this, and it's up to us to enjoy our time. final thoughts: I read that you are going to make changes in the timeline. I only hope that things don't get entangled. Playing with timeline in fanfics is risky because the chances of plot holes is very high. Overall: 4.6/5 Thank you for this fanfic. You are doing a great job.