Who would say that in my nights of boredom I would find this hidden gem, I must say that I came with little hope but ended up in disbelief at the story, it is certainly worth taking the time to read and I promise you that it will not leave almost everyone unsatisfied. Grammar with one or another defect but almost difficult to notice so it does not influence anything, the story is constantly developing that does not let the reader get bored and without a doubt it is something pleasant, I just have to congratulate the author and although I am happy to having discovered this fanfic I must say that I am also a little sad for having done this much earlier, now we can only wait for more chapters :c

5 star because the cover is Lamy also because of the tags , Konlamy!!! (ignore after this) komlamy desu. Yukihana Lamy Konnene! Momosuzu Nene desu!! Purupuru~ ganbair~ Risu! Moon Moon Moanafic da yo! o o o! Obisa no Iofi! Atashi ne Mori Callipe desu Kikiriki, Takanashi Kiara~! Yappa watashitachi futari setto ni naru n desu ~ Urusai kusotori! damare! Saa minna de issho ni!

More harem ++Liu Erlong++Ah Yin ++Hu Liena+++Zhu Zhuyun++Shui Bing Er++Shui Yue Er++Huo Wu++ Xie Lingling+++Bai Chenxiang++Xue Ke++Tang Yuehua+++Meng Yiran++Wang Qiu'er++Tang Wutong++++Xian Xia+Zi Ji+ Bi Ji+ Xiao Wu+ Ning Rongrong+ Zhu Zhuqing+ Bibi Dong+ Duyu Yan+ Qian Renxue+ Gu Yuena ++milf please.++++++++

This is a pretty good read in comparison to other fan frictions but gets very slow and boring after first 45-50 chapters. Especially with the same oversmart and all knowing mc who use 'huh' every 3 dialogues. Story is pretty much the same as the original with just some changes and added extra characters (including mc ofc). Also author has a maid fetish...don't get me wrong it's good & all and who doesn't need maids but - with every single FL being a maid? that's just weird imo and as I said, an author's fetish maybe. Grammar is okayish, there are alot of mistakes here and there but bearable. And this novel only has 5 star reviews so maybe this is going to be deleted too.

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5/5 so far in my honest opinion. Read upto chapter 21 so far and it is an amazing novel. I like the system aswell as the additional attributes/skills etc

one word describes this novel.."awesome" the background,the story telling is spot on. my only hitch would be that he gets too overpowered.

It was a five star ff till he didn't told them that they are fictional characters. Telling them about his past life is fine but I don't get the reason to tell them they are fictional characters only for him to convince them later that they are real to him. I mean if you know that you have to convince them later that they are real people not some fiction, just shut your mouth and save them from some existential crisis. Sometimes ignorance is a bliss you know.

very nice the story is good I'm still at ch 11 so I don't know if the system gives a punishment for not completing a quest...but for me this is a very good ff good job and keep up the good work👍👍