Review Detail of Demiurge_Ohara in Jaune Arc SI in the Multiverse (RWBY)

Writing- 4 star Story D- 2 Character- 2 update- 4 background- 4 Mmm... Everything is decent, but everything goes downhill when the salem arc is approaching. grammar, plot, execution and characteristics. MC:Jaune is a naive, reckless and gullible man that convinces himself that he does this and that for the benefit of Remnant. as the chapters release, it was shown that he's slowly becoming Even more reckless, hypocritical. Double standards and all. He broke my expectations for the worst and cause a the death of most populations. also he brainwashed his waifus, and executed them poorly at that. ( Salem arc and the unexpected smex with Raven and Yang. and many more) the quality of plot declines and I stopped reading before he'd traveled in another world.