Review Detail of Zero_619 in Jaune Arc SI in the Multiverse (RWBY)

Dude first of all you should give some kind of intro and atleast basic info about his powers before starting the story. Now the idea is a good one and the MC is not bad either but in trying to make it realistic you are just making him look angsty and emo brood as well sometimes. Though still quite a good read and will be waiting to see which worlds would he travel in the future.