Review Detail of bigpollo in Jaune Arc SI in the Multiverse (RWBY)
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You get thrown into the story and nothing gets explained. It seems like its based on some random CYOA, but there is no explanation for that either. The story feels plastic at best and holliw at worst. I hope the author sees this and makes some changes because it seems lazy and sad compared to his other Work.
Jaune Arc SI in the Multiverse (RWBY)
Fortunate_Soul
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I'm sorry about not giving an explanation for the CYOA power. I thought that the readers wouldn't like going into the details as such things can be distracting. I realized that I was wrong in that line of thinking and have set up a new chapter at the start which will explain what kind of powers the MC has and what those powers do. Can you read that and see it makes the story more easier to understand? Regardless of everything, thanks for reading my novel and have a nice day:)
Fortunate_Soul:I'm sorry about not giving an explanation for the CYOA power. I thought that the readers wouldn't like going into the details as such things can be distracting. I realized that I was wrong in that line of thinking and have set up a new chapter at the start which will explain what kind of powers the MC has and what those powers do. Can you read that and see it makes the story more easier to understand? Regardless of everything, thanks for reading my novel and have a nice day:)