Review Detail of Rindan in Jaune Arc SI in the Multiverse (RWBY)
Review detail
Honestly, at first I wanted to put a unit because of broken expectations in chapter 8. But then I thought about it and decided to be more objective in my assessment. The story itself is good. High level text. Not the linearity of the plot, which sometimes suffers from many fanfics. An attempt to reveal the identity of the characters. All this is a plus. There is only one minus, that in Chapter 8 the moral compass of the character is too overturned. Not what I can accept. in fact, one point is reduced precisely because of a sharp change, even 7 chapters are read about one, and from 8 about the other. Thanks for the story anyway.
Jaune Arc SI in the Multiverse (RWBY)
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During 7 chapters of the MC, although he used mind control, he applied it in the case and treated it responsibly and with repentance. From chapter 8, he was directly forced to enslave everyone and everyone and sell them into slavery, I don’t understand to anyone, but he didn’t really resist, accepting superficial arguments of the necessity of such actions. I can be wrong somewhere, I do not remember the plot already.
Gilandcheese:Mind telling me the MC's alignment?
Rindan:During 7 chapters of the MC, although he used mind control, he applied it in the case and treated it responsibly and with repentance. From chapter 8, he was directly forced to enslave everyone and everyone and sell them into slavery, I don’t understand to anyone, but he didn’t really resist, accepting superficial arguments of the necessity of such actions. I can be wrong somewhere, I do not remember the plot already.
already read it, the mc is naive and gullible, but turns into a hypothetical and selfish delusional idiot. stop reading it in salem arc, author lost interest in it.
Gilandcheese:Mind telling me the MC's alignment?
Demiurge_Ohara:already read it, the mc is naive and gullible, but turns into a hypothetical and selfish delusional idiot. stop reading it in salem arc, author lost interest in it.