Item: Doomsday: I Obtained A Fallen Angel Pet At The Start Of The Game
Rating: 2
Author: CrzyIvan

CrzyIvanLv143yr

2021-03-30 07:43

Another novel written with no knowledge about the country or area that they are writing about. I am guessing the author is Chinese with little to know knowledge about America but still trying to set the scene in it. The premise of the story is not bad but not good. "Evil" MC with OP skills being a dick but is a moron. At the start of the book the MC states he is on the run for murder as stupid as he is there is no way the cops didn't pick him up 10 minutes latter. I wanted to like this book but my hate for it grew the more chapters I read. One to avoid.

Doomsday: I Obtained A Fallen Angel Pet At The Start Of The Game

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