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Riya_San
Riya_SanLv53yr
2021-06-13 13:18

Sorry but highly disappointed... The beginning is nice and all... some parts in the story are good too... but it's like she, the FL has some huge burden or something... like that... it's just too fake... not satisfying at all... too many dramas and fighting... And... the main reason for this low rating is the ending of the novel... it's sucks a lot... thought the leads are together... but it's like... ughh forget it... anyway completed in mtl... skipped some chapters too... beyond boring... Just my personal opinion... many have different opinions...

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hell_addict
hell_addictLv3

Hey, can you explain the ending please? 🥺🥺

Riya_San
Riya_SanLv5

Well... when she will be getting ready... that Old man... I forgot his name... he says that the lead's Child will have to bear the responsibility to protect the entire continent and will face many dangers. The FL gets shocked... and for a moment will not react... Finally agreeing and decides to make her child strong... this is first half of the ending chapter. Second half , they get married.

hell_addict:Hey, can you explain the ending please? 🥺🥺
hell_addict
hell_addictLv3

Ohh, but they do end up together right? Just the ending was like left you hanging? That kind of ending? Where do you read it? Cause I search it it won't show up :3

hell_addict
hell_addictLv3

Hey I hope you can answer my question 😅😅 I was freaking confused when I read the part where they finally met😅😅😅 he is a freaking male right? This story is BxG right? I just wanted to confirm since you can never trust MTL when it comes to genders 😅😅😅 I hope you can answer me 🥺🥺🥺🥺 save my poor soul

hell_addict
hell_addictLv3

Thank you btw 😁

KeroroGunso
KeroroGunsoLv11

hi, can i ask a spoiler? who is the male lead?

Shadowhunter66
Shadowhunter66Lv14

I would also like to know please

KeroroGunso:hi, can i ask a spoiler? who is the male lead?
Okwa_dat_Igbo_girl
Okwa_dat_Igbo_girlLv15

For real? not a single commenter in 3 years answered the question of who the ML is. I also came to find out . at the rate it is going now, I'm like, I hope this is not going to turn into a reverse harem thing with all those guys. I wish she'd make a decision and be clear to all others that she's taken.

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