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Review Detail of Sir_Arthus in Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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Honestly? Compared to nearly all other system cultivation stories on this side, this is gold. No endless tournaments, no endless face slapping with povs who just go "Haha, look at this fool daring to inconvenience young master XYZ ..." and then later "OMG he is so strong, how can that beeee??!!" additionally, there are overarching plots... the mc is not just constantly ascending / going to a "stronger" place because NEED BE MOAR STRONK. (it is still happening but in a more believable way and he still has his sect he has to return to) Additionally, the MC is not a complete egomaniac and there is no Harem (thank God!). A bit of a detriment would be the timescale... The story takes place in a immortal cultivation universe... So it would be nice to see some longer time skips (with slice of life) before the next big event happens (I always stumble over the premiss of cultivators living thousands of years in a enormous world, and therefore thinking on a completely different scale, but events like the seemingly awakening of the true demon are seemingly felt instantly) @Autor. I would love to see the disciples to be an essential part of the sect in the future, because honestly, the sect is basically raising them while the mc is more like the rich uncle who lives in the same city and is there if needed but is not involved in every life at all.

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Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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Thanks for the review and also plan for the disciples to take part in the sect when they grow strong enough... And my timeskips could indeed be better xD