Review Detail of SomethingElse1 in Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

It's a fun read for a short while but after awhile, the corny jokes just get stale. The poor grammar doesn't help as well since a lot of times, it ruins the flow of the story. It's obvious with dialogue, the author attempted to create something similar to Xianxia novels but the dialogue really falls short. It's uncreative, poorly construed, and awkward. Story development and World Background is very generic to Xianxia novels so there's nothing wrong with it but there's also nothing unique either. Now, poor grammar can be fixed with sites like Grammarly. Dialogue is a bit harder but character design? All the characters are so similar, they all seem to have the same traits except for one point which the author shoves down your throats. There's nothing interesting about any characters and most of the time, the author forces a random character to do or say something stupid or out of line to for no reason. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed up till about ch. 80~ but then it just felt like a chore to read from stale jokes, to awkward dialogue, to forced drama. It started strong and died.