Nice chill novel.. nice concept.. plot is also fine so far I just hope the mc can have more character in him rather than being a block of wood.. more of his emotions.. more of his thought process.. than just him being totally rational to the point that it seems like there's nothing wrong with it.. but nothing awesome about it.. just normal I hope the story can make me feel more involved rather than making me feel detached to it and feel like watching a perfect side story going on.
PurpleSpring
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LIKEPurpleSpring:Know about it... Have also decided to include more development for him when I finish the part I'm currently in the process of writing. Hope you can come back and read my novel in a few months or so and hopefully see this development unfolding xD