Review Detail of Amir_Jebelli_4393 in Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Last time I just said it's a fun novel, now I wanna write a small review I think if the idieas and data of cultivation and cultures of the new world become more obvious(like realms In the firmament) , showing the bigshots and when the molti character view points being used in it as well as the story kipping a straight path, having some for shadowing in the middle it can become a great epic fantasy novel. Although the idea of the book is not new but the it has potential