Heyo crazy cronie here, review on 29/03/2021 @chap27 (released chap till date: 27) review divided in: Short review Long review IMO Ratings Conclusion Warning (includes spoilers) short review: Gives you 'Accept disciples and become stronger' and 'History's no one founder' vibes. AND LET ME SAY IT ONCE AGAIN, THE REVIEW IS BASED ON JUST 30 CHAPS! long review: pros: 1) Even though the story isn't original, this is still a fresh read since this ain't the type of plotline WN authors generally pick coz it's a lot more difficult. 2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro.) 3) MC is smart unlike other novels where the main trait of the mc is idiocy. No plot armour saving MC's ass, mc knows to hide, to run.... Atleast for now that's the casd 4) I love the pacing of this novel. Literally the events are not postponed forever and takes place when you need them. 5) Side chara gets the deserved attention. Even though still less than 30 chaps I know the author is giving them the screen time required. 6) Author interacts with the readers... Listens to their ideas, opinions and advices and uses them, a big plus compared to those who just take many criticisms and advices comments as malice.... 7) Maybe because it is new but the updates are stable.. and it is even 10 chaps a week!! Something which I love!! cons: 1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Too much info? Author sometimes give more than info dump required. (I cut my entertainment points coz of that.) 2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension as said above. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro since I was searching something like this.) 3) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Nothing can be said clearly about world. We don't exactly know where the plot is heading... But then again WE ARE JUST 30 CHAPS IN!! 4) MC doesn't have really have any ambition. Like *SPOILER* he just gets a disciple coz the system said so... The system didn't threaten him and neither it was shown that mc wanted to become really strong!! That maybe coz it's just 30 chaps and maybe revealed in the future. 5) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Easy to understand writing with little bit of typo errors and some grammatical mistakes which are negligible. IMO: - A little less info dump would be better... - A little ambitious MC would be a big plus for this novel, like creating your own clan/group/organisation... Just a lil bit of hint would be fine ... Even something like wanting to live a carefree life that's why making your disciples strong is also okay As long as my opinions doesn't spoil the plot RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (con-5) update: 9/10 (pro-7) plot: 8/10 (pro-1&2, con-1&3) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-3&5, con-4) pacing: 8.5/10 (pro-4) dialogues: 8/10 (pro-5) entertainment: 8.5/10 OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion: This novel has excellent potential! I am just worried like many other WN authors, he doesn't stop updating... I am seriously waiting for more updates:). Thanks for the chapters! If possible pin this review @PurpleSpring bruh! Next review after chap 100 WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)* - MC till now seems to be neutral. Neither hero, nor villain... Should have been anti hero but even that isn't mentioned... -
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LIKEIn regards to motivation of mc, I have plans to expand that in the future and I already started taking the story more seriously as a lot more people started enjoying it compared to what I expected at first. In regards to burnout and stopping updates, I have experienced that in the past with other stories I have written and have taken some steps I did not do before to ensure that it does not happen. One such thing is, to not have a schedule I can't follow. 1 chapter a day is not really stressing for me, at the moment and I think I can do more and will try to experiment and see what the limit is in the future. In the past I once did 5 chapters a day... So yeah... that is one way to burnout fast xD All in all, great review and thanks for the work you put into it, means a lot :D
Good concept Good World background Good character setting Ok system and initial info dumb too okish (kinda newbieish bad) interaction dialogues Bad (slow) progress like 30chaps but no arc Feels like filler chapters are a lot (chapter about how she met her desciple ) really there is no context for the chapter but only for word count kind
yeah info dump is but more than required~ author is a newbie so yeah dialogues seem a bit childish but they will improve after chapter 50 or so ig (most of the ******* authors improve by then) but the start is the arc itself... I mean getting a disciple training her and so on... well mc needs an ambition for us to know more about his personality...
Apocalypse_2ndLife:Good concept Good World background Good character setting Ok system and initial info dumb too okish (kinda newbieish bad) interaction dialogues Bad (slow) progress like 30chaps but no arc Feels like filler chapters are a lot (chapter about how she met her desciple ) really there is no context for the chapter but only for word count kind
Crazy_Cronie_1:yeah info dump is but more than required~ author is a newbie so yeah dialogues seem a bit childish but they will improve after chapter 50 or so ig (most of the ******* authors improve by then) but the start is the arc itself... I mean getting a disciple training her and so on... well mc needs an ambition for us to know more about his personality...
PurpleSpring:In regards to motivation of mc, I have plans to expand that in the future and I already started taking the story more seriously as a lot more people started enjoying it compared to what I expected at first. In regards to burnout and stopping updates, I have experienced that in the past with other stories I have written and have taken some steps I did not do before to ensure that it does not happen. One such thing is, to not have a schedule I can't follow. 1 chapter a day is not really stressing for me, at the moment and I think I can do more and will try to experiment and see what the limit is in the future. In the past I once did 5 chapters a day... So yeah... that is one way to burnout fast xD All in all, great review and thanks for the work you put into it, means a lot :D
not really... HN1F is based on pursuing power & immortality... this one is more of a SOL... both of the novels' mc accept disciples and they increase power thru system (the only common point of the 2novels)
wajoli_zako:if it has history's number one founder vibes will he have a stupid plot armour where he randomly gets strong after playing chess?
by mc not being ambitious i don't mean just the mc but the overall novel. the entire novel didnt had a aim or even a vague idea... any novel should atleast have a aim by atleast 10-15 chaps in order to let us have a rough idea... and secondly... well it's my biased review lol, for me it's a negative đđ
SNS27:I still dont understand how its a con that the mc is not ambitiousimage
Yeah i guess but like i think that the novel/mc not being ambitious can be a con or a pro for some people lol
Crazy_Cronie_1:by mc not being ambitious i don't mean just the mc but the overall novel. the entire novel didnt had a aim or even a vague idea... any novel should atleast have a aim by atleast 10-15 chaps in order to let us have a rough idea... and secondly... well it's my biased review lol, for me it's a negative đđ
Crazy_Cronie_1:by mc not being ambitious i don't mean just the mc but the overall novel. the entire novel didnt had a aim or even a vague idea... any novel should atleast have a aim by atleast 10-15 chaps in order to let us have a rough idea... and secondly... well it's my biased review lol, for me it's a negative đđ
my reviews don't get posted anymore.. I posted on 7 novels recently but none of them are posted.. i mean these type of reviews aren't posted.. short liners are posted tho but that's meaningless so sorry ;(
CockroaChan:where is 100 chap review?