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Dev_013
Dev_013Lv23yrDev_013

over all nice start... but it seem like u don't have plot or ideas wht to write 😑 cause in one chptr u only include a little to nothing...like last one I read mc pick up the herb and than u introduce a two char which was out of flow a bit nd there is no excitement in reading ch like this...or any anticipation... so I suggest u should chech other novels or take reference frm it...there is one novel..my diciple all are villain...

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Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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PurpleSpring
PurpleSpringAuthorPurpleSpring

made a plot line to follow, so should be better going forward :d though my imagination sucks... :/

Heiko41
Heiko41Lv4Heiko41

I recommend using discord and finding ppl to talk to about the novel, (aka other authors preferably more experienced) also you can find some inspiration from the internet or just shower thoughts

PurpleSpring:made a plot line to follow, so should be better going forward :d though my imagination sucks... :/
PurpleSpring
PurpleSpringAuthorPurpleSpring

good idea :D

Heiko41:I recommend using discord and finding ppl to talk to about the novel, (aka other authors preferably more experienced) also you can find some inspiration from the internet or just shower thoughts
Heiko41
Heiko41Lv4Heiko41

you should have gotten an inv to inkstone by one of the staff if you haven't I ca probably maybe help

PurpleSpring:good idea :D
PurpleSpring
PurpleSpringAuthorPurpleSpring

no idea about that, have not been invited :d Read that the novel needs at least 50 k words before that happens, but I honestly have no idea about how it works...

Heiko41:you should have gotten an inv to inkstone by one of the staff if you haven't I ca probably maybe help
PurpleSpring
PurpleSpringAuthorPurpleSpring

Sent an inv :), though I think I joined the webnovel writer channel years back when I wrote my first webnovel :d

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Heiko41
Heiko41Lv4Heiko41

nvm mind I am stupid just go to inkstone and hover over the assistants tab on the bottom left and a Join our Discord option will appear just click it and voilĂ 

PurpleSpring:no idea about that, have not been invited :d Read that the novel needs at least 50 k words before that happens, but I honestly have no idea about how it works...
klle
klleLv1klle

yup agree with you, my disciple are all villain is a good reference, good novel but lacking with a good plot, this novel was like a filler when you read it.