Review Detail of Luminous_Arcadian in Lotus Flower (BL)

It was an interesting story that has a great plot. The writing style of the author was very easy to comprehend. Although, there were quite a few grammatical errors and misuses of punctuation marks. I think it could be better to add more details and stabilize the characterization of the characters. That was only my concern but, so far, it was still a decent read.