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lol_shoeLv134yr
2021-03-23 06:21

I'm so invested in this story from the first chapter lol I can't wait to see where this going 👀👀👀👀 its so intense and serious that I was a little on edge 😂

The forbidden fruit

calfikydra
4.9
89 Chs

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HAha, this is my favorite comment! <3 hopefully i'll put your mind at ease at some point, lol

4yr
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Wolfgirl1215
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Oh my goodness! The quality of this writing is to die for. Please, dear author, teach me your skills. The constant foreshadowing of biblical verses, adam and eve etc, give this book a really unusual but appealing quality, and the writer does a fantastic job of sustaining mystery and tension throughout. And dear gods, the tension and drama is high! Wow! The main character is beautifully written. Well crafted, strong, but also has many flaws which make her seem entirely human. She makes bad decisions, mistakes, and that really adds to the charm. I love the dual perspective of this book too! The shift in narrative adds a huge amount of depth to the story and the world building elements. Honestly I am blown away by how amazing this is. Fantastic work!

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phoenixhyperion
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This is seriously one of the best book I've ever read. 😅 I can't detect a single flaw in the pace. Its cohesion amazes me, like, wow, this author has talents! I can sympathize with what the character is going through, I can vividly see the world from her perspective, I can understand why she becomes who she is now, seriously, you have the touch that could evoke the feelings from your readers that can make them feel what your character is going through. And that's so amazing! Hats raised to you author! Splendid job on this book. Keep up the good work! Hope you keep updating for more!

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CodeyVanilla
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Okay, I’ll try to make this as quick as I can. I’m not done with the book yet. This is splendid. I honestly have a hard time believing this is the author’s first book. The book is spotlessly and flawlessly written with so much emotions portrayed in it. I’m completely and crazily in love with the female lead. She’s so strong with an outstanding personality. I personally love mafia romance and if I should even try to compare this with any of the books I’ve read, the difference is clear. The male lead, whew... I won’t stop writing if I start. I love this masterpiece , a job well done, author. You’ll definitely be seeing more of me here, cause I’m coming back to review. Thanks so much, author for sharing this masterpiece with us and I’ll highly recommend this to everyone. You won’t regret you gave it a chance.

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Nancy_Jim
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Here is my honest review. The female lead of this story is definitely someone you are going to love. Adrena has an admirable personality. The fact that she can think for herself and has this mem* Oops! No spoilers, read up to find out what I was about to say. Back to my initial comment, she is a mentally attractive woman and one of the FLs I've fallen deeply in love it, how she thinks, how she talks, how she does everything that she does. She's just my kinda girl. ❤❤ Don't even get me started on the ML, I think I might have a crush on him already. I know I can be that shameless😂😂 This book is highly recommended, not just because I am saying it. Read it and you'll see. Let's push this one to the top where it deserves to be alrighty? 😘😘😘

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Mel_Aniv
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The author successfully laid out the plot with an interesting biblical start. I am happy for the author's courage to write this and I am proud of you. Your reader, here. Kudos and Peace! ✌️

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maryconary1_2
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i love this! especially the little ''notes'' that the female lead is writing in the beginning of her chapters - so different and original! the author is so talented and the writing skills are superb. the story is so exciting to read, especially because it's so different from the other romance novels i've read about mafias. the characters are so amazing and the story build is exquisite! much love from America <3 where is the author from?

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KingAraragi
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Ive read about half the book so far, and it’s really good. You said that english is not your first language, but I wouldn’t have guessed that unless you said it. Your writing is some of the best i’ve seen. You’re able to express emotion and complex thoughts easily, and it makes it easier to understand the characters thoughts and feelings. The story is very unique. A lot of stories on this app are just retellings of the smae story, but I dont think i’ve read anything quite like this before. You have a new fan. Keep up the good work.

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What a beautiful book! Everything in this book is wonderful! The way the author described the settings and wrote the dialogues are truly talented. The writings are neat and clear without a single mistake. I also love the way the author re-tell Adam and Eve's story. It's so smart and interesting. Five stars are not enough for this book, but I just have five stars to reward the brilliant author ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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Wow! I read all 11 chapters and then discovered that a new chapter was released the second i finished! I love this book so far, it's so exciting to read and i'm already in love with all the characters (some more than other, Dimitri is disgusting..) but i love it! I can't say this enough, but this is a great read and i will recommend this to anyone who's looking for a book that has both romance and action. Can't wait to read more :)

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Want a badass heroine? This is your stop! A novel with great potential. I am at loss for how beautifully written this is! Great job, author!

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