in the beginning I was really into the book. then it got the middle and it turned me off. the fl is supposed to be strong and smart. but to me she is weak and dumb. I was trying to read more but it started to upset me. how the ml and fl is being played .I'm almost 90 chapters in and they still not together. ugh I was waiting on the love and smut. I would have took it as a slow burn but the book is completed so before reading the end I know it will end half ass. I thought this is one of those books I would enjoy but I got mad in the middle. like I want my money back. don't get me wrong. to put a story together isn't easy.so I applaud đ you the fact you did that. I just felt for some smart people. they acted pretty stupid. like I got to go back a read the rest. just because I want to know was she just playing dumb. lol anyway keep up the good work so far this book just wasn't for me. I'm more of a let's fight together not alot of miss understanding and communication skills. and the characters lact all that. it wasn't until it got to the paid chapters that it slowed down for me.
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