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Houteki
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2021-03-06 12:07

I'll be honest here and those other copy/paste reviews really did nothing well to be actually informative. Please, don't undermine the rating I gave just yet just because it didn't got a full 5-star review from me First, the writer has a peculiar writing style. There are a lot of jumps in his story that somehow doesn't feel like it's making sense, but after reading a few more chapters, the same format is used throughout which makes me thing-----that it's really how he writes. Next, the narrative is good, and it feels more like a... freestyle poem more than a narrative. It's actually the first time I've seen something written like this, and it actually looks like there's some kind of cipher within the text XD Lastly, I'll be blunt. I still don't see how the future looks. Most stories, you'll be able to see how the end probably would look like or predict based from the synopsis, but the synopsis is actually just the same as the first few words within the first chapter. Well, I'm no editor but also just another author, and I hope you take my review with soy sauce. There it is, I'm done, and I know that you won't probably like my review anyway so I won't ask for a like as usual XD

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Thanks Other Books from Author: BitLove: https://***.webnovel.com/book/bitlove_19277591006022105 7 Creator Games: https://***.webnovel.com/book/7-creator-games_19366455705122805 Gen XPrays https://***.webnovel.com/book/gen-xprays_19408887505243505

Houteki
HoutekiLv2

I forgot to mention that you also have other books, and that reading those may give more info about this one XD

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thank you so much for this book you are a great author to be honest I never really liked to read these types of book 📚 but it is so nice 🏆🏆

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