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Master_Of_gu
Master_Of_guLv13yr
2021-09-21 03:44

The first thing is good work, the character of the hero is well weird I notice you trying to improve the way you describe events, the second thing you went down a risky path I call courage, your novels have no imitation of the events of the novels even building the world is something new from your imagination Of course this is difficult and at the same time a good thing This is how in the future you will make your own path. Personally, I do not like the harem, but I enjoyed until chapter 20. Thank you for your effort. It is okay to try to imitate some of the worlds of other novels because their description is rich of sites and events and the large number of characters of course with changing things, especially the character of the hero, good luck

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

Gaburieru
4.8
199 Chs

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Wolfgirl1215
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Reading this was an absolute rollercoaster. Its thoughtful, poetic, and dear god is there some drama! I have never been through such emotional turmoil! Prince is such a loveable character, he isn't snobby or rude and doesn't follow the usual stereotypes, which is really nice. I like how his personality was shaped and developed so nicely by his past, and his dynamics with the other characters is equally fantastic. Some great world building, witty and quality dialogue... I had a blast reading this, and would recommend it to anyone.

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Gaburieru
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Other than being shameless and reviewing myself... Id like to say if you enjoy Tear-jerking betrayals, mind games, master plans, and epic fights, you will enjoy this story. After reading the first two chapters, you will have a good feel on whether or not you will like this story. P.S, yes I am top 50 most handsome man

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Megana4
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A great story...I read the first few chapters and it intrigued me to read further...The author's writing style is perfect...The character design is quite good throughout the story...The world background is splendid...Hats off to the author for his innovative ideas in the story...Kudos work, Author!

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Favour_Eme
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"A man without ambition is a coward", this is a fact! I'm love the first chapter and I can't wait to keep reading. Dark romance is my kind of book so it has been added to my library. Keep it up 💃💃💃

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Spirit_Realm
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A great medieval story that one can binge read. Still on four chapters but it has shown some promising outlines. I can't say much about the grammar, but despite the errors It was readable. Kudos Author-sama! Keep writing for the win!

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CalypsoDay
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I actually like your story! It has a lot of potential. Sure, it could use a little more here and there, but the idea is nice, and the character design is also quite good. What I appreciate are the world background and the description. I think they are both able the immerse you in the story. Overall, good job author!

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It's a work of art,just the writing alone makes reading this masterpiece worth it,and the story is on par with the writing,you've got my power stones

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5/5 I'm a fan of vampire novels because of the european feels, edwardian courtesies and what-nots~ and you gave me that feeling in your novel... Your novel hooked me up with your poetic lines, thus I'm liking the prince more and more. The story progresses quite well and I like it, it wasn't too fast or slow. Author sama is more on dialogues, giving us readers the chance to know more about each characters personality. Well, one judges a person by he she speaks. Your description were on spot and author sama does not drag the novel into a lengthy one ( well, it depends on the genre and the writing style of the author) . I'm rooting on this one author! Keep writing and happy writing!!

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