Oooh! I like it! The story is good and interesting. I like how you portray their personality and it's not hard to read. maybe you should make the synopsis more clean? The idea is there but maybe you can write it better? (IDK) Keep up the good work author!
Chaitzzz
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LIKEYsabel_xox:You're welcome. Synopsis is the first thing readers read, so making the synopsis better will attract more readers.
You're welcome. Synopsis is the first thing readers read, so making the synopsis better will attract more readers.
Chaitzzz:Thank you! Will take your suggestion seriously.