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Ysabel_xox
Ysabel_xoxLv42yrYsabel_xox

Oooh! I like it! The story is good and interesting. I like how you portray their personality and it's not hard to read. maybe you should make the synopsis more clean? The idea is there but maybe you can write it better? (IDK) Keep up the good work author!

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Into the past, I became a grandma!

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ChaitzzzAuthorChaitzzz

ok

Ysabel_xox:You're welcome. Synopsis is the first thing readers read, so making the synopsis better will attract more readers.
Chaitzzz
ChaitzzzAuthorChaitzzz

Thank you! Will take your suggestion seriously.

Ysabel_xox
Ysabel_xoxLv4Ysabel_xox

You're welcome. Synopsis is the first thing readers read, so making the synopsis better will attract more readers.

Chaitzzz:Thank you! Will take your suggestion seriously.