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chanduy
chanduyLv32yrchanduy

i usually do not pic historical dramas as i don't like myself to get frustrated. but i picked this one seing the tags but after reading 200 plus chapters, i understand that i was mislead. first its not rebirth, being unconscious/coma and roaming for a few months is not rebirth. i mean rebirth tag for webnovels, not literal meaning. there is no faceslapping as well. too much drama and sadness which is not my cup of tea. I was expecting face slapping so i did not expect it to be too tragic. I would like to read a mixed one, like some emotional scenes then some fun part, action etc. also the misunderstanding was dragged too much that it became annoying. because not a single character talks and leads to misunderstanding. nobody bothers to explain, especially the couple and second couple. if there is a creative misunderstanding, then it is understandable but here most of them are due miscommunication and dragged for long, still not a single thing is cleared. clearly several opportunities were there but it appeared deliberated so as to give mystery vibe. i doubt most readers will drop in the middle because of this. i because we have to wait for updates is one thing and too much dragging will lead to frustration. even while Bing reading i felt that. now pros of the novel, very nice plot and writing style is very good for except the things above. explaining of the emotions is too good and i loved it. grammar mistakes are minimal to zero in most chapters. though misunderstanding is dragged and annoying, the plot is captivating. i will buy another 50 chapters to see how it goes, because i read for entertainment and release my stress. if the sadness continues and misunderstandings are not cleared then i will drop. though its only around 10 to 20 percent, still there are a few sweet scenes. seing the writing talent of the author, I really wished to have read a more entertaining novel than sadness or at least a mixed one.

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Ada_5253
Ada_5253AuthorAda_5253

Thanks for the review. If you want to know why the tag is rebirth, please Read it until ch 300, you will get to know. Faceslapping is also around these chapters and sweet scens are also ongoing. I appreciate whatever you pointed out. Thanks

chanduy
chanduyLv3chanduy

sure dear, I will then change my reviews . thank you 😊

Ada_5253:Thanks for the review. If you want to know why the tag is rebirth, please Read it until ch 300, you will get to know. Faceslapping is also around these chapters and sweet scens are also ongoing. I appreciate whatever you pointed out. Thanks
Ada_5253
Ada_5253AuthorAda_5253

It's okay. I can actually see whatever you have pointed out. However, it was my first time to write a story 😅. I thought that world building is very important but then I concentrated more on that. I am still learning. I appreciate whatever you have pointed out as it will help me in the near future when I will write. Thanks ❤️

chanduy:sure dear, I will then change my reviews . thank you 😊
chanduy
chanduyLv3chanduy

the reason why i typed so much on mobile is that, it doesn't seem like it is your first time. i saw you mentioned it on comments, but your writing skills are beautiful that i did not feel like i am reading an author's first novel. so i decided to point out and i have seen that you care about your reader's opinion. I have been reading tons of literature and if i point out usually what readers would like, it would be helpful and we can get what we want too... win win... wish you best of luck dear 😘. I also liked the fact that you kept the ml clean even if the story is historical drama. its rare... I wish it could be same for second ml too... but it is hard in this kind of background. I too hate gender biase. thank you.

Ada_5253:It's okay. I can actually see whatever you have pointed out. However, it was my first time to write a story 😅. I thought that world building is very important but then I concentrated more on that. I am still learning. I appreciate whatever you have pointed out as it will help me in the near future when I will write. Thanks ❤️
Ada_5253
Ada_5253AuthorAda_5253

chanduy:the reason why i typed so much on mobile is that, it doesn't seem like it is your first time. i saw you mentioned it on comments, but your writing skills are beautiful that i did not feel like i am reading an author's first novel. so i decided to point out and i have seen that you care about your reader's opinion. I have been reading tons of literature and if i point out usually what readers would like, it would be helpful and we can get what we want too... win win... wish you best of luck dear 😘. I also liked the fact that you kept the ml clean even if the story is historical drama. its rare... I wish it could be same for second ml too... but it is hard in this kind of background. I too hate gender biase. thank you.