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Bruno_Corre
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Amazing how the story progressed so little in 13 chapters, we know a little bit of the protagonist's story as the father of Roger and the others and that's it ... We saw Roger's death and his burial ...I think you can do that in 5 chapters or less. So I think that's it ... A lot of bullshit.

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The Worst Father(?) In One Piece

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Ground_Pound
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I like the slow start its getting us into the story explaining the backstory a little and setting up the rest of the story so i like that it is not rushed and it also gives me more to read

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