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Good writing quality and stability of updates, but the problem is the story itself, atleast up til chapter 50, where I stopped reading becuase I am not wasting Fast Passes on this if the same quality continues. The main character is just bland, a blank paper that nothing is written on. This might be something that the skill of Cranberry, but I doubt it. The reincarnation part is also utterly useless, and it never factors into the story or the character, outside of a quirky comment about names in this new world. Cranberry is just the good old "abused but not THAT bad", forgetting the fact that after killing someone she complained that she didn't get a cool magic, like pyromancy. Honestly, while I don't like the mother I can see how it can be hard to love this child. The world encounters the same problem that every world with this type of system encounters; the fact that it should all be ruled by extremely powerful warlords that carve out their own part of the world while monopolizing good places for farming EXP. I honestly can't recommend this story, which I feel is a pity because the premise is good, the writing quality is amazing, but the world is thought out so poorly, and the main character just isn't any good, while the supporting cast cant even begin to pull their own weight, let alone help the story out. It feels like it could be unique, but instead it feels like several genres smashed togheter in a poor attempt to create a good story, and instead you end up with an amalgamation of all the bad parts and some of the good ones. A real pity.

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