Review Detail of MrChinchila in Messiah: Soldier of the Orient

Okay, here we go. So, I liked the concept. Meshing eastern fantasy with sci-fi was not something I expected to read about. (I'm around chapter 5, so my review will be up to there.) I can't judge the Stability of Updates fairly since I began reading it now. I'll leave it at 5. Grammar and syntax are good, I get a feeling of overwritten? Just a bit, nothing to panic about. The story and world building. World Building is the star for me. The story is confusing at some points, yet not impossible to follow, so yeah. These are my thoughts. Keep it up.