Review Detail of calfikydra in Redemption Of A Reborn Soul

Well, let me start out by admitting - fantasy ain't really my genre. So as i began reading, i wasn't expecting much to be honest - it's a flaw i'm willing to admit. BUT I suddenly realized, that i had read 8 chapters just like that, which startled me a little. The storytelling is very good, there's a few grammar errors, but nothing that can't be changed in later edits. I love Alystar, and the world the author build around the MC. As a critique, i would say that the chapters are a bit short - will recommend the author to make them a bit longer, but that's just my preference. Thank you for your novel <3