Review Detail of Saran_Preeth in The unexpected Destiny

This story has incredible potential, and the author's understanding of characters has managed to compliment the plot, little mistakes were seen here and there, but as far as I know everyone makes mistakes, you have a great skill of story telling and keep building on it😁❤️, a suggestion from me is that you should avoid over explaining things some times it's good but some times it disrupts continuity. overall it has been a very good read and waiting for the next chapters. Your understanding of your characters is just out of the league, as a writer I envy you. you're amazing. keep it up.😅❤️