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naffan
naffanAuthor2yrnaffan

Sorry to say, I probably won't be picking this novel back up. It was my first attempt at writing. As expected, without experience, mistakes were common. However, I learned a lot from them. The root of my main issue stemmed from releasing chapters as I wrote them. I kept wanting to change things that I had already solidified. The things I wanted to fix stacked up, and I found myself thinking more and more about what could have been than what I could write next. The other major problem was that I grew not to like my MC, primarily how he interacted with other characters. I initially framed him for character development, but I created a dull wall. At the very least, I found a hobby I enjoy. And I'm thankful to all that gave this novel a chance. Around a month ago, I started working on a new story. However, I don't plan to start posting it until I have a significant stockpile; I'm talking more chapters than this novel ever reached. Perhaps I'm letting the pendulum swing too far in the other direction, but I don't want to leave anyone hanging when I try this again.

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The Magnetic Mage

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Daydream_
Daydream_Lv1Daydream_

I at least hope you'l make a remake of their story as the world building and the idea was great.

TakeAChip
TakeAChipLv10TakeAChip

Thanks for coming back and telling us, excited to see your next novel!

Glendios
GlendiosLv14Glendios

Dang i really like this novel and the MC. Oh well, hope your next novel is good