Review Detail of Deb_Nath_6301 in The Magnetic Mage

You lost me here.. I don't understand why all authors have to go with cliche plots to introduce female characters or love interests. Stop, get some help.. mimic allowing itself to be pet so easily by a random girl and the guy talking about random stuff about science that the girl seemed to have understand everything and even apply it to counter the mc. And how the mc is a whole rank above her but he still gets played around everytime he fights with a girl. I still remember the fight with sonia. How he kept getting so 'SURPRISED' and had to resort to so much effort to defeat her. Like seriously if you had to give him a friend, a normal and more logical plot and characters will suffice. By doing this unnecessary stuff you are killing your readers interest. A guy who hardly gets influenced by emotions loses it when he sees his long lost buddy Aaron and continues to lose his brain where there is a possibility of him losing his life. Nice character development.. I am impressed.. bye.