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Shuree143
Shuree143Lv111yr
2023-03-17 23:40

A well-written story. The grammar is good. The character design of MC is fleshed out, although the MC is not my cup of tea. The author knows what he wants, and it's clearly shown in the plot, even if I don't like how it ended. Romance is okay at best. Anyway, if you love indifferent and neutral evil MCs with a bit of character development in the latter chapters, and hates harem, then this is for you. Otherwise, stay away as it might just turn you off when reading the early chapters.

HxH: The Applications Of Nen

VeganMaster
4.6
228 Chs

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FanficCultivator
FanficCultivatorLv1

5 star I was bribed!!! ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

Best girl.

3yr
Isekaied_Hero
Isekaied_HeroLv2

I will give a 5 Star..... Cause I love your work🥰 .................................................................. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...

3yr
eccentricbeing18
eccentricbeing18Lv4

Although the novel is well made, he's little too emo and dull for my taste. And there's no real direction nor goal for the mc. It's not something that work well with the hxh universe.

3yr
JohnWickCat
JohnWickCatLv12

it's really an interesting story for sure but disappointing enough that i couldn't say it as a good story, decent might be the best way to describe it. and what make it disappointing at least for me is mainly 2 things. the way how author try tell or describe the author original main character and how unrelatable the motivation that the mc have in make a big and important decision that literally altered all the entire HXH universe the author instead tell the story with the way "show don't tell" the author choose at early stage of his story to just laid it all of who exactly is mc is, and that's make the mystery of the mc and my curiosity of him just answered very quickly and abruptly and that make feel unsatisfied in receiving the answer. instead of creating situation where all the qualities of the mc could be shown or shined one by one, step by step which the author actually did at his early chapters but somehow instead continuing it the author choose to create a semi information dump chapter of the character and make all my curiosity just instantly gone for the mc. but still I am interest not to the mc, but to what he exactly he gonna do and then he make the decision, which is a big important decision where i personally couldn't make any sensed of it or related it or feel justified of it. because for me I couldn't see myself doing it if I placed at the position of the MC neither any justified benefit of why the mc make such a big important decision. and because of that I personally choose to stop right now reading it, at least for now. we will see.

3yr
Daoist351660
Daoist351660Lv4

I absolutely despise stories that start in the middle and try to act all mysterious by not giving you any information about the mc. I hate this and I hate you for writing it.

3yr
typicalanimewatchr
typicalanimewatchrLv12

Good story with bad ending. MC unalives himself after getting strong just because of "humanity" when his partner will die. Not recommended. [img=faceslap]

1yr
_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5

Underrated ......................................................................................................................................................

3yr
remonssi
remonssiLv2

Reveal spoiler

3yr
ZoneTail
ZoneTailLv5

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆

3yr
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