I loved everything about this story. it had wonderful penmanship, plot and ending. I sincerely hope to see more stories from you soon, and can't wait to see what else you can come up with.
I am already in the process of writing another story :) I also already have two other stories published, this one is my second actually. You can check out Ant king in MHA or Light Human in MHA if you're bored. They are very different from this one though.