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2021-03-09 18:33

is ash actually the Mc? From pokemon if not please tell me im a dumbass. ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ

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VeganMaster
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He's just named Ashton :))

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it's really an interesting story for sure but disappointing enough that i couldn't say it as a good story, decent might be the best way to describe it. and what make it disappointing at least for me is mainly 2 things. the way how author try tell or describe the author original main character and how unrelatable the motivation that the mc have in make a big and important decision that literally altered all the entire HXH universe the author instead tell the story with the way "show don't tell" the author choose at early stage of his story to just laid it all of who exactly is mc is, and that's make the mystery of the mc and my curiosity of him just answered very quickly and abruptly and that make feel unsatisfied in receiving the answer. instead of creating situation where all the qualities of the mc could be shown or shined one by one, step by step which the author actually did at his early chapters but somehow instead continuing it the author choose to create a semi information dump chapter of the character and make all my curiosity just instantly gone for the mc. but still I am interest not to the mc, but to what he exactly he gonna do and then he make the decision, which is a big important decision where i personally couldn't make any sensed of it or related it or feel justified of it. because for me I couldn't see myself doing it if I placed at the position of the MC neither any justified benefit of why the mc make such a big important decision. and because of that I personally choose to stop right now reading it, at least for now. we will see.

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