I have to first say that the story has potential. But There is a lot of grammatical errors, like Gacha becomes Guchi, Active skills becomes skills active and many others which can be fixed with a spellcheck system. Also some of the skill names feels uninspired and plain borning. Other than that it’s Difficult to say anything else until the grammar has improved.
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