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While your writing quality isn't quite there (you can always get an editor), the story is interesting so far. You have an interesting plot, and it will be cool to see where you will go with this story. How will technology change a world of cultivation? How will the main character change the cultivation world with his technological assets? I'm looking forward to it.

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thank you for your suggestion, I will try to improve my writing quality thank you